tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3354915789972448915.post9141546541673555988..comments2024-03-27T05:14:28.724-04:00Comments on Author Michael J. Sullivan's Official Website: Writing Take TwoMichael J. Sullivanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06892162383465544899noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3354915789972448915.post-4935380175026255112020-08-04T02:44:42.235-04:002020-08-04T02:44:42.235-04:00This is the first time that I visit here. I found ...This is the first time that I visit here. I found so many exciting matters in this particular blog, One thing I would like to request you that pls keep posting such type of informative blog.<br /><br /><br /><a href="https://www.mjackets.com/category/movie-merchandise/captain-america-shop/" rel="nofollow">Captain America Jacket</a><br />Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03352264044149524233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3354915789972448915.post-5267577962260692062020-07-07T10:39:58.535-04:002020-07-07T10:39:58.535-04:00Download Mobdro right now to your device, this is ...<a href="https://mobdrovip.com/mobdro-for-android/" rel="nofollow">Download Mobdro</a> right now to your device, this is the best application for watching movies, sports, news, music online in 2020. MobdroVip is the brand that provides and develops Mobdro application for all. bridge.MobdroViphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12444979394085857234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3354915789972448915.post-30114459424940288442020-04-20T12:36:32.425-04:002020-04-20T12:36:32.425-04:00Awesome post, thanks for sharing.
lawrence
slides...Awesome post, thanks for sharing.<br /><br /><a href="http://www.lawrence.com/users/pjordan06/" rel="nofollow">lawrence</a><br /><a href="https://slides.com/pjordan06" rel="nofollow">slides</a><br /><a href="https://www.hackathon.io/users/141354" rel="nofollow">hackathon</a><br /><a href="https://tldrlegal.com/users/pjordan06" rel="nofollow">tldrlegal</a><br /><a href="https://community.hedonism.com/members/pjordan06/profile/" rel="nofollow">hedonism</a><br /><a href="https://devblogs.microsoft.com/dotnet/welcome-to-the-net-framework-4-7-1-early-access/" rel="nofollow">microsoft</a><br /><a href="https://devblogs.microsoft.com/dotnet/announcing-net-framework-4-8-early-access-build-3621/" rel="nofollow">devblogs.microsoft</a>Lynne Branthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04305651817646529204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3354915789972448915.post-68909639669029370662020-03-15T05:01:08.467-04:002020-03-15T05:01:08.467-04:00I am using Mobdro as an online TV viewing applicat...I am using Mobdro as an online TV viewing application on my phone. This is the app to watch movies, sports, news and many other popular shows all over the world. <a href="https://mobdroplus.com/download/mobdro-for-android/" rel="nofollow">Download</a> now Mobdro and learn more about this great application yet.Glen Dixonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00958601401222327242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3354915789972448915.post-48528791067890284152019-02-27T07:21:59.477-05:002019-02-27T07:21:59.477-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.mikonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00020457880484119572noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3354915789972448915.post-70198197718711151892019-02-16T08:28:06.283-05:002019-02-16T08:28:06.283-05:00Preparing changes the life of an understudy. Guida...Preparing changes the life of an understudy. Guidance help the understudies with drawing out <a href="http://www.scriptwriting.biz/screenplay-example-list-you-have-to-read-in-order-to-write-a-great-script/" rel="nofollow">explore more</a> abilities and get advantage from the limits given by the God. It is so fundamental for an understudy to have the ability to use his abilities and make the presence placated.Velva Blockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11192131006723287472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3354915789972448915.post-43226859589043060892019-02-12T13:52:09.249-05:002019-02-12T13:52:09.249-05:00The skills of the writing are deeply followed and ...The skills of the writing are deeply followed and inquired by the teachers. The errors of the writing are depicted for the use of the <a href="http://paraphrasingonline.com/get-content-paraphrase-from-our-top-writers/" rel="nofollow">paraphrasingonline.com/get-content-paraphrase-from-our-top-writers/</a> for all candidates. The page of the writers is shared and improved for the successful range of the scripts for the people.<br />mikonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00020457880484119572noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3354915789972448915.post-20424996653429986132019-01-24T08:14:27.784-05:002019-01-24T08:14:27.784-05:00I advise you to write climate change essay if you ...I advise you to write <a href="https://writemypaper4me.org/blog/climate-change-essay" rel="nofollow">climate change essay</a> if you want to be a successful student. It will help you to learn something newRichard Majecehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00744139132776752086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3354915789972448915.post-71678378160718340282019-01-17T09:23:00.259-05:002019-01-17T09:23:00.259-05:00Investigators are appreciating our sustenances als...Investigators are appreciating our sustenances also and researching to discover new and restoring sorts of verdant sustenances. As, authorities are helping the <a href="http://www.spellingcheck.info/the-process-of-spell-correction/" rel="nofollow">http://www.spellingcheck.info/the-process-of-spell-correction/</a> ranchers to develop the vegetables and normal things in advance season.Velva Blockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11192131006723287472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3354915789972448915.post-50691914075347436662019-01-17T05:15:43.707-05:002019-01-17T05:15:43.707-05:00This article is so good for me in writing skills a...This article is so good for me in writing skills as Truth be told. everybody necessities to recognize life furthermore needs to visit wonderful parts of the world in light of <a href="http://www.bestcapstoneprojects.com/only-the-best-senior-capstone-project-ideas/" rel="nofollow">http://www.bestcapstoneprojects.com/only-the-best-senior-capstone-project-ideas/</a> how our reality is incredibly excellent and it is our benefit to see the distinction.Velva Blockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11192131006723287472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3354915789972448915.post-36107572637167674882019-01-17T00:18:55.250-05:002019-01-17T00:18:55.250-05:00A tyke can't get getting ready to an incredibl...A tyke can't get getting ready to an incredible degree well without the assistance and support of <a href="http://www.biowritingservices.com/best-biography-writing-service/" rel="nofollow">visit the page</a> watchmen. The help from the guardians requests that the understudy get direction cheerfully and truly. Hildegard Flatleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17834571338997127323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3354915789972448915.post-89149087867150063292016-07-24T11:04:28.163-04:002016-07-24T11:04:28.163-04:00Are you familiar with punctuation check software? ...Are you familiar with punctuation check software? In truth, this is a spelling, grammar and punctuation check program, because it does all this and more. Compatible with any text or word processing program, it can quickly transform your computer into a proofreader and copy editor. See more <a href="http://www.punctuationchecker.biz/tips-for-using-free-grammar-and-punctuation-checker/" rel="nofollow">check my grammar and punctuation free</a><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04571828795230778384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3354915789972448915.post-18106393500604509732013-02-25T13:44:36.932-05:002013-02-25T13:44:36.932-05:00I want to thank you for your various excellent pos...I want to thank you for your various excellent posts on the art of writing. They've been more than merely helpful to me, and, no doubt, many others too. Ta!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3354915789972448915.post-91300220638533308622013-02-24T22:59:27.913-05:002013-02-24T22:59:27.913-05:00Nice blog post. I write very scene by scene like ...Nice blog post. I write very scene by scene like a movie. I don't have any transition filler (I think), but I have received feedback that without it my books seem a bit jumpy. However I have received feedback just the opposite that people liked that they did not drag on or get swamped in detail.<br /><br />It can be hard to figure out what to do sometimes as a writer. Do you go and add more makeup, costumes, hair designers, and set directors for your book until you don't hear people say it lacked detail? By then the people that liked the lack of filler probably won't complain there is too much, but they might not remember the longer read if it slows down the action and drama.<br /><br />It's a balancing act for sure.SBJoneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10457239074744509487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3354915789972448915.post-75103822019321200892013-02-24T13:01:19.668-05:002013-02-24T13:01:19.668-05:00Great post!
Until my later teen years, I read a l...Great post!<br /><br />Until my later teen years, I read a lot of comics and some nonfic. Watched some tv and read only a few novels. So my experience is similar to yours, but not exactly the same since comics fall a bit between comics and movies, though they lean more toward the cinematic spectrum. I also study cinematic story structure. In part because movie folks like discussing the nuts and bolts of structure where so many novelists seem to cringe at the mere thought.<br /><br />I write almost exclusively in scenes as well. I think I used the filling-in-the-gaps technique two, maybe three, times in my latest novel. I suspect my others all use it about the same amount. I use it where a movie would likely do a montage. Montage works great in movies, stringing together a bunch of quick shots to show a lot of small actions over a large chunk of time. The cliched training montage of a fighter spending weeks getting ready for the big fight, that sort of thing. Montage doesn't really work in novel prose. You end up with super short scenes that lack any drive or you end up with a lot of scenes to cover a small idea, throwing off the pacing. So that's what I use that technique for, when information and actions and the passage of time must be covered but quickly and simply. Takes a few sentences, no more than a few paragraphs.<br /><br />I suspect some writers who don't plot write in the distant casual narrative mode because they're just keeping in motion until they hit the next scene. I don't have a lot of patience for stories written that way. Possibly because I write in scenes and watch so much television and movies along with reading.David Alastair Haydenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04388339435468414583noreply@blogger.com